Last Life (Halo 3 Machinima MOVIE)

Its coming soon, we're rapping the script together.
we're not even close to being finish it.

Well anyways, down to the summary.

Last Life is going to be a Halo 3 Based movie with loads of action.
It is about a Invasion that happens on earth (Yes, I know, Invasions have been overused)
A average Marine named Jake and his partner, Kyle, and their superviser, Caron, were the 3 victims to witness whats really coming.
It turns out there are good aliens.. and bad aliens.
And not all humans understand that, and just randomly fight for there lives, even killing the good ones.
Jake, Kyle and Caron hold most of the secrets in their hand.
(Like Transformers xD)

Jake (Marine)

Age: 28
Gender: Male
Record: 83%
Class: Assault

Primary Weapon: Assault Rifle
Secondary: SmG


Kyle (Marine)

Age: 31
Gender: Male
Record: 81%
Class: Sniper

Primary Weapon: Sniper Rifle
Secondary: Battle Rifle


Caron (Marine)

Age: 29
Gender: Female
Record: 93%
Class: Demolition

Primary Weapon: Shotgun
Secondary: Rocket Launcher/Spartan Laser

Thats all I can give you, but I will soon release a part of the script
Please list CC and feedback on how this could be better, or you just want to comment about it.

-Illusion
~Zealot~